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Wreckage Pieces

This is me: an amount of pieces
Sliced by a persisting remaining pain.
Your absence just torn me apart,
Leaving a lifeless sense of loss.
I can no longer understand the reasons.
Just keep wondering through the thoughts,
Trying to unveil the turbulent portrait
Of an unbelievable farewell.
Will I ever feel your caramel taste lips again?
Only a slight memory may appease
This agonizing and slow motion fading …
It’s so unbearable to breathe
And not sensing your dazzling fragrance.
I cannot rest until I embrace you
Under that willow tree again!
Please give me your hand and
Let’s walk away from this dream.
I’m ravished by reality.
It’s where I truly touch you.
No subterfuges are implied,
No devious devices make part of the plot.
Meanwhile, I’m pieces of wreckage
Waiting for you to pick up the remnants
And hold them together within you.



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Que bela montagem, querida!... Adoro a simplicidade do conjunto, e a beleza que imana dele. :kiss:

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«Tormented echoes of a fallen Eden...»
Obrigada! É a minha primeira manipulação. Coisa simples, mas algo que eu queria fazer há já algum tempo.

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Be welcome to visit my gallery: =Eileithyia and my band's site ThanatoSchizO!

.:. One day, life will bring you back into the light... .:. :butterflytwo:
The poem and visual go so well together. I really like the style of both of them. Though the emotion conveyed is not a pleasant one I still enjoy reading something that conveys it so well. This is truly great work.

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- The One and Only Musashi.
The emotion isn't a pleasant one, I agree, but it really suites the whole package, as you so truly said.

I'm glad you appreciated this. Thank you for your words.

:rose:

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Be welcome to visit my gallery: =Eileithyia and my band's site ThanatoSchizO!

.:. One day, life will bring you back into the light... .:. :butterflytwo:
Que a minha visão não me traia, que os meus sentidos não me enganem... tu escreveste e fizeste uma imagem que poderia tão bem ser a imagem que já vi e senti tantas vezes em mim e noutros.
Fizeste-me sentir. Sentir cá dentro, a escorrer... ah... como sentir faz bem.
Adoro a imagem. Mas o poema leva-me em mãos...
Ah. Doi. Mas faz-me sorrir.
This is great. Nice work.

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"We all die...The goal shouldn't be to live forever, but to create something that will." -Chuck Palahniuk

"The greatness of a nation and its moral progress, can be judged by the way its animals are treated." -Mahatma Gandhi
Thanks for encouraging my work. :)

:rose:

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Be welcome to visit my gallery: =Eileithyia and my band's site ThanatoSchizO!

.:. One day, life will bring you back into the light... .:. :butterflytwo:
É mesmo esse o impacto que quero ter ao escrever algo: que as pessoas se revejam, se sintam e se emocionem. É mesmo bom saber que te fiz sentir. Fico mesmo feliz que assim seja.

E como não podia doer se o poema é dor?

Obrigada!

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Be welcome to visit my gallery: =Eileithyia and my band's site ThanatoSchizO!

.:. One day, life will bring you back into the light... .:. :butterflytwo:
Absolutely. :)

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"We all die...The goal shouldn't be to live forever, but to create something that will." -Chuck Palahniuk

"The greatness of a nation and its moral progress, can be judged by the way its animals are treated." -Mahatma Gandhi
It is really nice, and origional that you have used pictures to create a picture :)

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